Wednesday, October 24, 2012

OctPoWriMo day 24 2 seasonal views

Todays challenge involved picking words at random amd also wriiting as minimally as possible...something I'm not good at. The words I picked were spring vows and fixed and I pared it down the best I could.

Spring
A time to sprout
A time to seek

Summer
A time to find
A time for vows

Fall
A time to harvest
A time to shelter

Winter
A time to lie fallow
A time to endure

And even as I was typing I saw another way.

Version 2
Spring sprouting seeking finding
Summer growth vows relaxation
Fall harvest shelter stewards
Winter Fallow endurance serenity

3 comments:

  1. Both are wonderful - the first one is my favorite!

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  2. Oh, these are both excellent! There is something so powerful about short poems that I am learning to embrace.

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  3. I have trouble with brevity...so it was interesting to submit to this challenge...

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