tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post5043919001277069764..comments2023-05-02T07:38:27.964-04:00Comments on Meg on the Go : OctPoWriMo day 18 TimeKeepingMeghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01288912903659572443noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-52667019950302264612012-10-21T09:28:41.664-04:002012-10-21T09:28:41.664-04:00It shouldnt be "Time flies when you're ha...It shouldnt be "Time flies when you're having fun" it should be "Time flies when you're having kids."Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01288912903659572443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-70137056626349854882012-10-20T15:25:41.869-04:002012-10-20T15:25:41.869-04:00I love this one - especially how you described the...I love this one - especially how you described the difference between the passage of time as an adult and an adult. And the last line is so poignant. Linda Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285985403444531922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-61393702949183532872012-10-20T05:03:19.711-04:002012-10-20T05:03:19.711-04:00Thank you so much Danielle...you made my day. Thank you so much Danielle...you made my day. Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01288912903659572443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-17326317932790353252012-10-20T04:56:06.978-04:002012-10-20T04:56:06.978-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01288912903659572443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-86451584273680045232012-10-19T22:09:00.132-04:002012-10-19T22:09:00.132-04:00I was hoping somebody would take this approach to ...I was hoping somebody would take this approach to time. This is my absolute favorite out of all of the 'time' themed poems I read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-91125394118520635362012-10-19T17:11:36.741-04:002012-10-19T17:11:36.741-04:00Thank you Lena. I have gotten away from rhyme and...Thank you Lena. I have gotten away from rhyme and havebeen trying to use it more, but most of the poems this month have refused to go there. It worked with this poem though.Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01288912903659572443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-9252132352172451082012-10-19T17:08:53.743-04:002012-10-19T17:08:53.743-04:00Thank you Beth. I had fun with all the differant ...Thank you Beth. I had fun with all the differant cliches but in the end time really just is.Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01288912903659572443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-49755986502259245882012-10-19T02:23:08.591-04:002012-10-19T02:23:08.591-04:00You've captured the many paradoxes of time so ...You've captured the many paradoxes of time so well, Meg. I really like your use of rhyme here, too. Lena Corazonhttp://lenacorazon.tumblr.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6217685383374207609.post-71730037217534782742012-10-18T21:35:55.244-04:002012-10-18T21:35:55.244-04:00I liked your reflections on time, especially the e...I liked your reflections on time, especially the ending, for despite our best intentions, procrastinations, worries, and efforts to stay on schedule, "time just is!"Beth Camphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12682622561621269515noreply@blogger.com